RAIN DROP AND LONELINESS




A cold wind blew

It was so cold everywhere

I was looking for a place to rest

But it was very dark everywhere.

I looked around.

I couldn't see anyone.

I was so lonely

I was trembling as the wind blew

I think , I ' d have flu

The streets were full, but I was lonely.

Outside was crowded

But I was alone in myself

Loneliness was not a problem

I used it

Everywhere is darkness

And also some silence

But I needed to talk.

Maybe I'd just relax and maybe I'd be a little happy.

I 've tired to recover to myself lately

I asked myself why I have no one.

Maybe I was imprisoned for solitude

That's why I had more to learn than loneliness.

But I'm bored so bored.

There are a lot of people everywhere

Actually there is no one there

But I'm alone like a lost child

I changed my hair and dyed

But not

I don't know why, but I'm a little hurt.

I'm so bored of loneliness

I watch raindrops when it rains

Is it lovely ?,no  it is lonely

Was it alone in spite of falling apart with every raindrop?

Maybe

I wonder if the raindrop was alone in the crowd like me?


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  1. It is interesting! You should not feel lonely. You have a lot of friends like me.😉 I like your poem.

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    1. Thank you my dear friend , I dont feel lonely , it is only poem but maybee..... 😁

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  2. Is it a poem? What a beautiful surprise! I like your empirical text .

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    1. Yes I wanted to write a poem , thank you ablam😊

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  3. Oh my good. It is really good poem. Did u make up it? You will be good poet.

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  4. I like this version. Maybe you are better in writing poet. Keep going.

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  5. an alteration we expect from you:) keep going.

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    1. because ı am crazy , ı will do other things :)

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  6. It seems like a poet is rising among us. But i would like to see happy versions of this too.

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  7. It's like a bit gloomy but I love it.
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